I wrote this poem. can you be honest and tell me what you think???

Controlled By fear
Of being at a loss
Of life I hold dear
But at what cost?

Broken heart I insure
Not to loose A heart that once was pure

Many chances have been given
To a life forbidden
But at what cost?

Broken dreams I crave
Broken wings I bare
To secure a home and embrace
But at what cost?

Loneliness and sorrow I ride
To keep the secret I hide
But at what cost?

Days and years will pass
Without a glitch of the past
To keep you from seeing what I lost

I lost me!

At all costs!

Leave something for someone…

Leave something for someone…
never leave someone for something because in life something may leave you
but someone will always live with you.