Kelvin 'Sgt. Mac' McFarland: Boot Camp Video Emerges Detailing Abuse Of Teens (Warning: Graphic Video)

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I wrote this poem. can you be honest and tell me what you think???

Controlled By fear
Of being at a loss
Of life I hold dear
But at what cost?

Broken heart I insure
Not to loose A heart that once was pure

Many chances have been given
To a life forbidden
But at what cost?

Broken dreams I crave
Broken wings I bare
To secure a home and embrace
But at what cost?

Loneliness and sorrow I ride
To keep the secret I hide
But at what cost?

Days and years will pass
Without a glitch of the past
To keep you from seeing what I lost

I lost me!

At all costs!